An FMA doodle

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bandwidth might die..

well... not really a doodle but... an experiment... yeah...
He's sleeping in the library.. This is the 3rd fanart i've drawn for any anime really.... My drawings are a little awkward b/c i'm not used to drawing anime.
The main point was to get adjusted the structure of an anime human being in different positions. I have one where he is playing Dance Dance Revolution on playstation...
But yes... As you can see... I don't really know how to draw clothing, just vague guesses..
I'm was planning on inking ad coloring after it''s fine tuned a bit more..

However I need pointers..
Suggestions are apreciated...
Comments? hints? tips?

Thank you!

Nice.


I like all the little details.

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the back looks a bit hunched back apart from that its v good [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif[/img]

OMG the DETAIL o.o


Awesome work. I'm not gonna critique because I guess you've gotten the only critique there is... and I only glanced at it (I'm working)