I do think this video is better than the previous. the intro goes along pretty well with the music.
but in the rest of the video; the music has a nice strong beat/rythm, so it's an idea to synchronise the images a little more with the music. since it's more of an action AMV.

but I'd say you're improving.

Originally posted by: Dunpar
and yea my spelling dose suck and i do try........ helll i have a dictionary right next to my comp....... but i have that thing wher the letters reverse and....... whell english was my WORST subject..... so plz dont knock on my spelling tooo much.......(after all the words to me look correct).....but that is my subjective view.........

also tonight i should be able to post my new AMV improved amv up..... and like before feel free to talk about it as much as u want......BUT LEAVE MY SPELLING ALONE.............I DO TRY.....

also any other amv makers plz feel free to show off your amv"s here... yea i know we aint AMV centeral.... but hay if we get new amv makers intrested we can use this zone as a buffer to the outside criticism..... so all AMV guys let us see your work with out fear of being riped down for a shitty amv.........
don't worry, I'm not attacking your spelling. but do you mean that you're dyslexic? I kinda recognise the way of spelling. 3 out of my 4 brothers are dyslexic. [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif[/img]

I'll look to see if I have any of my old AMV's stored somewhere. but I doubt it.