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  1. Mon, 07-31-2006, 06:00 PM #1
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mizuchi
    The hyuuga character isn't bad. All i have to say that others haven't said already (shading, more rounding) is the spear should be thinner and maybe longer. Also, you could do better on the hair and eyepatch. Although i would prefer he lost the eyepatch, but that may just be my own thing against eyepatches. I noticed too that his face needs to be a little more round. It looks kind of like a triangle, when it should be more rectangular.

    Also, you should give him more of a relaxed look. Most of him does look relaxed, but the hand thats holding the spear makes him look really tense. Same with his hair, you should lengthen it a little in the back I think.

    Other than that, gj. 5.5/10
    Why don't you just draw your own picture? You're basically describing a whole new idea...

    Just wondering about the spear-ish type weapon the guy is holding... I see it is double sided... is it used for impaling, or more like spinning around and slashing? :-P

    I think the second picture is really awsom.
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  2. Mon, 07-31-2006, 08:52 PM #2
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    Quote Originally Posted by Canadian
    Why don't you just draw your own picture? You're basically describing a whole new idea...
    Because Im not good at drawing. Why don't you join the debate team? You sure do like to argue


    I believe the double-sided spear is not used for impaling, nor is it used for slashing. It is simply there for shear badass-ness. Atleast in my opinion.

    And is this guy part of the head or branch family? If hes part of the branch that would make him so bad ass. And you should give him that little swastika sign on the forhead (or cross as in the anime).

    Then again, if he is part of the head family, he could be one of neji's rivals, as lee-sempai doesn't quite seem to interest neji too much. Maybe the spear could be used as another absolute defense? Or maybe a very powerful offense to counter neji's defense?

    When you make a really nice character, you should give him an identity. Like specialties, rivals, personality, likes, dislikes, maybe even team members? You know, the whole naruto bit.
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    I think he's just a drawing.
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