If people aren't willing to reply, then some feedback is better than nothing right?
I voted for "Don't care much for the story, but the directing idea you had may work. I wish you luck, and if I could rephrase it, I'd say something similar with "I wouldn't care much for the story and wonder if you could pull off the organization, but if you did then I'd at least check out the first few episodes."
Before I continue and critique your story, I should note that I get the feeling that my opinions tend to fall into the minority of what's considered good or bad here at gotwoot.
I thought your characters and story was boring and cliched, despite your efforts. It felt like you were taking a whole bunch of ideas that have been done and putting them together. Your protagonist has no clear path in his life, and your story of this project is going to define one for him. He has a love interest and rival, who happens to be the coordinator of this project he's stumbled across. You have the wise director who understands everything is under control when others aren't calm. The story reminds me a lot of Evangelion and Stellvia, and I haven't even seen much of Evangelion. It may be just me, but your description of the plot makes it easy to think that it'll be much like other warrior-in-suit type animations which I'm not much of a fan of.
About what is happening in the first (few) episodes: The introduction of the characters and the hook pulling Sol into these events seem adequate enough, and you're establishing the type of story you want with the action, drama, and romantic aspects which is good.
To your organization idea: I have no experience in production, nor am I an artist or flash animator. However, I don't see or understand the incentive or reason that people would want to do this. Is it just to produce something cool? Are you trying to find people who want to help create this? Why produce it? Are animators going to do this as a hobby or free-time thing?