on a more positive note...

it is pretty cool that you put something together like this in the first place. there is alot of room for improvement, but you shouldn't be discouraged by that. you obviously like to draw and should keep doing it. maybe experimenting with different styles would help.

also, this is a mostly an anime forum, where standards are pretty high for quality of art and all that. i'm sure you'd get much better feedback from deviantart or other, more artist based, online communities.