Madness: Too much information crammed together with unnecessary references to past events, instead of developing the characters only confuses the reader. Not so good grammar.

Mechanic: Perfect characterization. The explanation of the main character's life and thoughts went flawless. The story suffers by adding a supernatural event where it wasn't needed though.

Live Arm: Not sure what to say about this. Writing style is good and progress well... yet the plot... I don't know its... corny? Leaving facts, like what was used, or the outcome of the murder, in the dark weakens it.

Jack: Wait... what? Uh... okay. Non-descriptive while the characters talked made it look like a script instead of a story.


Meh.... I'll get some sleep and then expand my comments. I know which I'm voting though.