First and foremost, Intervention: I thought this was a fantastic Story.

Secondly, the vote. I vote Yes, IF, and this is a pretty big if, if we have an informal policy that the section was developed with the intention of sharing and constructively assisting each other. Not merely a board for criticism of stories. I believe it would do more harm than good to expose novice, beginning, or self conscious to constant or needlessly harsh criticism instead of constructive criticism and helpful advice. So, like I said, I voted yes; but that yes comes with some strings attached. If the board was expected (or even tolerated) to have the level of discourse of the trolling board I would have voted no.