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Sat, 05-03-2014, 02:54 PM
#11
I think the much bigger problem with this episode this week was how heavy-handed the exposition was. Earlier we didn't really get enough explanation of what was happening, and this week we got far too much. The first three minutes contain more dialogue than many other shows do in a half hour, and 100% of it was exposition.
Show, don't tell.
Major failure in storytelling this week.
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