stopped reading after a couple of pages the 3rd hokage or whoever he was looked real goofy. but ill guess ill finish it if it is so great.


EDIT: just read it, it wasnt that good he looked weird in fox mode and all the stuff about i am a demon wooohooo was really boring and then when he sat behind the tree and started crying wasnt anywhere near the emotional status as when iruka told mizuki that naruto was a human being not a demon.... i think the real show is better.. obviously kishimoto thought so to.