Need some artistic feed back

[Assertn]

well, the first thing that i saw was that the guy on the right looked smaller than the guy on the left.....
i understand he's supposed to be in the background, but i think the way they both have a similiar level of detail and how there isnt alot of overlap, it makes him look like he's just a small guy who's next to the guy on the left.

If this was taken from something that was already drawn though, then i guess i shouldnt be telling this to YOU in particular, though [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif[/img]

One thing you COULD do, if you want to try it, would be to blur the orange haired guy and trees a little to add depth and focus onto the other guy

everything else looks good though [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif[/img]

[Lefty]

Blur effects are always the last thing I do on piece. That should help diferenciate the two. I thought the highlight on Ichigo's jacket would seperate them but I was wrong.