i just read it and thought it was freakin awesome

the white chakra thing was kinda weird but its just a connection with kakashi and his father the "white fang"
obito is still clumbsy for being scared of the ugly stone nin and having kakashi save him once more,
but obito, in the end, help save both rin and kakashi
kinda too early to die, really suprised me there, and somewhat of a shitty way too
Rin must have done a lot of medical justu training to take out one eye and place another one in so clean and fast, dont know if theyre gonna dispose of obitos body or if well see it again in a later chapter

the other leaf nins against the stone nins, i think fourth wanted them to throw the kunais as a distraction, then the fourth could take em out quickly, but the teleportation markers thing could be what hes doing too