Ok, two especially stupid things:
pg. 8
Aizen: "If it only takes one swing to erase something, then after three or more swings, its specialness should disappear as well."
What the hell? Is that supposed to be profound? How the hell is that deep? It doesn't even make any sense. Who the hell writes Aizen's script?
Pg. 13-14
Ichigo: "How can you even be sure about what's going to happen to yourself?"
Gin: "Oh my, I didn't think you'd say *that.* The way you phrased that makes it seem like your own death is a given."
How so? How does that phrase make it seem like his own death is a given? How do you get from A to B without a crazy imagination? Is there something lost in translation or is Kishi an idiot? He does realize we can't know what he's thinking, correct?
Also, didn't Gin use to have a funny way of talking before? What happend to that?