Hmm?What I donīt like is the butterfly imagery.
The butterfly is the *perfect* image for what is happening, I don't see any problem with this.
What exactly are you trying to say here? What's "natural" about it?Iīd prefer a more generic effect, because it being a butterfly shape means that somebody is behind it, manipulating things, rather than it being a weird natural occurence that only our mc has access to.
I thought it was rather obvious that this is a reference to the "Butterfly Effect" which, in this case, is actually more of a "snowball" or "domino"-effect.
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