Quote Originally Posted by Ryllharu View Post
Also, if you couldn't tell that the black night was a teenager, and very likely a girl, you were also missing every single hint since their first appearance.

I know you want edgelord clichés when it comes to fighting/battles/war, but the kingdom here is actually doing things intelligently by valuing their own soldiers' lives the most.

I'm not entirely sure I see the value in showing a field of corpses again. They already did as they were running across it, showing it again doesn't serve the narrative they're going for because the victory was in saving as many human lives as possible. The kingdom was on defense.
Nah, I don't want "edgelord cliches", I want realism instead of "Am I kawaii?" clichees.

And the knight being a girl was supposed to be twist reveal, there were no obvious hints, but of course you knew it. I applaud you, Ryll.